Showing posts with label Glossary. Show all posts
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20080801

The Planets in Order of Habitation

Old Earth: The oldest (duh). No remaining metals or significant sources of energy. Abandoned by most of mankind, and those left behind have returned to a hunter-gatherer lifestyle. When contact was re-established, the inhabitants had no interest in modernizing, nor any capital with which to do so.

  • Asha, Nanda

  • Remaining humans eventually bred into one “race.” Medium-toned skin, hair often dark brown or black, thick and straight, and eyes are exclusively brown and almond-shaped. Short!

  • Highly empathic.

Newearth: Once the major seat of power in the Consortium, it has been recently usurped by Kiran after the building of the University and naval center there. Planet has been largely urbanized; few natural places remain, and as a result the inhabitants feel very out of place in natural settings. Many of them are wary of animals due to a lack of contact; pets are rarely kept on Newearth as there is no space for them in the cities and feeding them is obscenely expensive.

  • Reid, Bastian

  • Inhabitants tend to have pale skin and dark, wavy hair, with no freckles. Hook noses common, eyes tend to be deep-set. Eyes are most often green, and may have a bluish cast. Tall!

Oceanus: A planet comprised entirely of water, colonized to provide a food source to the inhabitants of Newearth as cities took over areas once used for food production. Crops are grown hydroponically, and fish species have been seeded and are now harvested in large numbers.

  • Inhabitants are pale, freckled, often blonde to light-brown haired, with hazel eyes. Very occasionally, redheads are born. Cleft chins common.

  • Elene, Seamus, Caroline

Kiran: ("Beam of Light") The new social and political center of the Consortium. Several major cities that have been planned to work well with the environment, resulting in one of the most habitable planets. The University is there, which is responsible for both training officers for the Navy fleets and teaching empaths how to control their powers. Many people on Kiran are developing empathic powers as well, and as a result fewer inhabitants of the planet hold prejudices against psychics. Convention dictates all empaths alter their names to begin with A. This was originally done by the empaths themselves to develop a sense of community, but recently this tradition has been used to promote and aid in segregation among the more conservative elite.

  • Physical traits more variable, though tend to have deep blue eyes, olive skin, and brown hair.

  • Keven, Desmond

Midbar: ("Desert") A desert planet that held great appeal to the descendants of the nomadic people of Old Earth. The most racially homogenous of the new planets. Until recently, empaths were uncommon in Midbaran families, but cross-breeding with Old Earth Natives and the Kiranese has caused a recent surge in the planet's empathic population. Responded by closing their borders to empaths and deporting all natives that possess the gene. In the first draft, the reasoning behind this is unclear, but I think I am going to make it religious.

  • Two distinct types of people now dwell on the planet. The original inhabitants have violet or grey eyes and darker skin. Hair is dark, straight, and fine. Second-shortest race next to Old Earth Natives. The new wave came mostly from Newearth and Oceanus, and as a result tend to be far paler with coarser-textured hair of varying color.

  • Diane.


That Which Came Before

Here is the timeline I use to keep everything straight in my head. It's got some info that hasn't been worked into the chapters yet, but none of it is really spoilery, so I decided to post this online for visual people who want to know just what went on before Asha stepped off the shuttle and into the Kiranese sun.

Draft: 2.


EVENT

TIME ELAPSED

Old Earth Abandoned/Newearth Colonized

0

Oceanus Colonized

300

Kiran Colonized

400

Newearth/Kiranese War

425

Old Earth “rediscovered”

426

Midbar founded

War ends

430

432

Rise of Kiranese empaths

475

University founded

  • Search for Type 3 empaths begins

500

Political tensions begin

Desmond born

523

558

Reid, Keven born

582

Elene, Diane born

585

Bastian, Asha born

Nanda, born

Keven, Reid arrive at University

  • Nanda finds Asha (<3)>

Elene, Bastian, Diana arrive at University

  • Recruiter finds Asha, Nanda

Asha and Nanda arrive at University

584

587

603


604


605

STORY BEGINS: Spans next two years on Kiran.

20080721

The Empathic Naming System

Official Name Changes: When empaths first came to power on Kiran, they instituted an informal naming system as a point of pride. After the end of the golden age, the naming system was adopted and made mandatory by the planetary governments. The general rule is a new name must be taken by the empath by age 21, or when they graduate from the University. Here are the names pending for current characters.

  • Bastian (venerable). Will become “Asten” when he has completed his training.

  • Nanda (joy). Will become “Andir,” because I like the name. (Also, “anda” means ride.)

  • Asha (hope). Will remain the same when she has completed her training.

  • Reid (dwells within a clearing). Will remain the same; he is a non-practicing empath.

  • Elene (torch). Will become Alina when she has completed her training.

  • Diane (divine). Will become Anya when she has completed her training.

Note the A names are all two or three syllable. That is part of the Kiran convention. Names that end in A are always feminine, and those that end in consonants are masculine.

  • Asten, Andir -->MALE

  • Asha, Alina, Anya-->FEMALE